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Drowning in this darkness
I can't hear myself screaming
It's all just silent
With a whisper of a lost smile
Tickling my tear-streaked face
Caressing away my happiness
Nobody's listening in this Hades
Thief Cupid's bow like you did my heart
And shoot me like they did Achilles
In the only weak spot I can't feel
Since I ripped it from my chest for you
Watch me as I collapse
Within my own created world
Falling apart and breaking down
'Til one day I have nothing left
And I have nothing left to rebuild
~Britt
I can't hear myself screaming
It's all just silent
With a whisper of a lost smile
Tickling my tear-streaked face
Caressing away my happiness
Nobody's listening in this Hades
Thief Cupid's bow like you did my heart
And shoot me like they did Achilles
In the only weak spot I can't feel
Since I ripped it from my chest for you
Watch me as I collapse
Within my own created world
Falling apart and breaking down
'Til one day I have nothing left
And I have nothing left to rebuild
~Britt
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One again written mor so for the masses, but I did happen to write it after I wrote a note to Jatana...but I also wrote in my journal...so I think it was more the journal that inspired it...that and Mrs. Kimble's comment in poetry club yesterday that one should try to use allusions to get out of their comfort zone. I tried it, I don't think it's that bad.
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ummm....
o wow is all i can think to say and it sounds just oh so eloquent compared to that wondermous poem of your miss britt....
can anyone say holyfreakingcowamazing? xD
i <3333333333 it muchly
o wow is all i can think to say and it sounds just oh so eloquent compared to that wondermous poem of your miss britt....
can anyone say holyfreakingcowamazing? xD
i <3333333333 it muchly